Hey all, new author here! I recently submitted my fantasy story, Rising, into the (of course) fantasy section. It starts out pretty slow and it takes awhile for the sex to start, but I'd like to think it's a relatively decent work of fiction.

If anyone has any kind of question/comment/critique, I'd be more than happy to hear them here, or at [email protected]

I hope you all enjoy, chapter 2 is on the way soon!

C.B.

Just read the story and really enjoyed it CB! You have a good way of painting pictures with words to help the reader visualize what's happening. Look forward to Chapter 2.

Dicksbro,

Woo-hoo! Huzzah, my first feedback! Thanks for the kind words, aaand...since you were nice, I'll go ahead and post up ch.2

Follow this great and wise man's trend, people

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hmmm...2000+ reads and only one message of feedback...slight discrepancy, eh? ^^;

Maybe I need to start bribing folk.

Leave me comments and I shall stop making a mass annoyance of myself!

Leave me comments and I won't post up nuddie picks of myself, thus sparring your eyes and precious brain cells!

Seriously. Anyone enjoying? Not enjoying? Feed the feedback whore!

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Most of the people who read the stories are not necessarily a part of the forums. Many are just passersby on the web.

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I suppose I hadn't really thought about that...

well. Now I just look like an ass.

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