we all have been in situations that was simliar is what makes the story great hun. now stop worrying about the story. its fantastic. the 'talk' you speak of is in actuality, "damn i remember doing that or saying that before". the 'action' of it is just you helping us play out our fantasies. the reality in the fiction. now git back to it.

*spanks you*

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