A Place In The Woods
 

WANK

first of all I don't think you learned proper grammar in school. The story had an ok story line but the authour needs to keep the story in 1st person narrative or 2nd person narrative don't jump back and forth it get's too confusing ok! just some friendly advice for youe next story, I hope there are no hard feelings ;) :D

not too good

I thought it was kind of interesting, but confusing